Please read the above screen shot for the review of Georgia's blog.
As I was unable to post on Meg's actual comment box, she was emailed a review. You will find the review below.
Dear Meg,
When reading your blog post, I can see how much time was put into delivering an insightful look into digital footprints. I found your blog easy to manipulate as it was not overcrowded with images and information but allowed a user to move around the site with ease.
One part of your blog that I enjoyed the most was your connection to personal experience. This gives the reader the ability to connect with you as the writer and understand why you have reflected and concluded in the way you have. I believe this is an essential trait in writing a blog post.
An area in which you could have improved was during the discussion regarding the five stages in the Dam, RF. 2017 article. Some readers who are new to the five stages do not understand the breakdown of them. As you have only briefly tapped into this article, further analysing of the article and stages may help the reader understand your viewpoint.
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog Meg.
Kind Regards
Katerina
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